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titus
Survivor of Hell
Joined: 03 Aug 2003
Posts: 778
Location: Standing at the Hell mouth |
well because you already posted some of your works I thought I would put in one of mines.
this I wrote when my grandmother had died
Now you are gone
and I am left alone.
There was so much
that still had to be said
and had to be done
but your gone
and I’m hole alone.
You where there for me
when I needed someone
but now, there’s no one.
Now there’s nobody to cry on his shoulder,
There’s no one to have fun with.
Now there is no one,
because you are gone.
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Fri Jun 10, 2005 9:28 pm |
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Knarnak
Keeper of the Gates
Joined: 01 May 2005
Posts: 109
Location: Illinois |
hell ya dude....keep it comin....
lets keep addin n addin more poems then ill make a book outa them later
so keep up the good work bro....
ill come up with another one later
peace...
-porter
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"Your mouth is full...full of disease. And yet, I still want to pull your teeth." -Knarnak |
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Sat Jun 11, 2005 3:55 am |
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Knarnak
Keeper of the Gates
Joined: 01 May 2005
Posts: 109
Location: Illinois |
Mind warped mysteries hidden in the light...
A bonesaw rips through the fluids...
The highest preist cannot be called tonight...
Not even the highest druids...
Grab your forks and light your torch...
For we shall have a feast!
We'll rake the steps of Heaven's porch...
And stab away at least...
We'll travel through and sauce the flesh...
For thats the way it should be...
You'll make your move and pass the test...
And yet my class you'll flunk, you see?
So skip the middle and lets pass time...
For we both need our sleep...
Dont forget to dream and rhyme...
And these mysteries you can keep...
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jus made that one up right here....didnt have it writtin down er anything.
u like?
thanks all....
-porter
p.s. titus, yer awsome and this one was actually inspired by you!!
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"Lord below, your abysmal horrors we call forth. Awaken! Rise up and cleanse this earth with fire." -T.B.D.M.
"You are not crazy if you talk to yourself. You are only crazy if you talk back..." -?
"Your mouth is full...full of disease. And yet, I still want to pull your teeth." -Knarnak |
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Sat Jun 11, 2005 4:16 am |
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Kamahl
King of Spam
Joined: 29 Apr 2005
Posts: 1668
Location: Slovenia-Ljubljana |
nice very nice i must say for both of you
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Sat Jun 11, 2005 1:04 pm |
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titus
Survivor of Hell
Joined: 03 Aug 2003
Posts: 778
Location: Standing at the Hell mouth |
I am honoured that you write a poem inspired on me and my work 
I have that often like you did, that there is something, a moment, a thought, a feeling an event or so that just inspires me.
this I worte after reading someones guestbook:
I bow to you full of respect
This I never did before
but the deepness in your text
it touched me in the deepest
and darkest corners
of that weird thing
in my body
that people call
a heart
with my full respect
I bow to someone
who has lived
already 2 life times
and sounds like
she has been
through hell.
thx for visiting my former home
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Sat Jun 11, 2005 2:00 pm |
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Kamahl
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Joined: 29 Apr 2005
Posts: 1668
Location: Slovenia-Ljubljana |
former home?
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Sat Jun 11, 2005 9:31 pm |
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titus
Survivor of Hell
Joined: 03 Aug 2003
Posts: 778
Location: Standing at the Hell mouth |
well if you have had some "nice things" happen to you for a long period of time it does feel like you are living in hell. but I finally succeeded to crawl out of it 
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Sat Jun 11, 2005 9:56 pm |
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Knarnak
Keeper of the Gates
Joined: 01 May 2005
Posts: 109
Location: Illinois |
hell yes man!
keep up the good work...
ill return with more.
thanks all!
-porter
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"Lord below, your abysmal horrors we call forth. Awaken! Rise up and cleanse this earth with fire." -T.B.D.M.
"You are not crazy if you talk to yourself. You are only crazy if you talk back..." -?
"Your mouth is full...full of disease. And yet, I still want to pull your teeth." -Knarnak |
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Sun Jun 12, 2005 1:15 am |
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Kamahl
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Joined: 29 Apr 2005
Posts: 1668
Location: Slovenia-Ljubljana |
quote:
Originally posted by titus
well if you have had some "nice things" happen to you for a long period of time it does feel like you are living in hell. but I finally succeeded to crawl out of it
oh i see , nice
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Sun Jun 12, 2005 10:56 am |
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Knarnak
Keeper of the Gates
Joined: 01 May 2005
Posts: 109
Location: Illinois |
Your mouth is full...full of disease. And yet, I still want to pull your teeth.
Your blood flows thick...thick and gritty. So let me help you spill it.
Your mind is rotted...rotted by worms. Let me grab a plate.
A porage brewed and forgotten long, and now it sits so cold.
A placate nightmare that never ends, and seems to grow so old.
Your bowles have moved and now I feel, as if something was missing.
Your spinal fluid spills and taps the ground, waking about the hissing.
I stand and rot...rot full force. And yet its not complete.
I crawl and squirm...squirm through dirt. So let me punish you.
Ive baked away...away with no cells left. Let me fade away.
The dark carnal madness, slowly peers its head.
But oh how I cannot wait, for lives to lie dead.
So now we sit, and see what comes created.
But the difference is, my creations are completely inibreated...
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how bout that one guys/gals? you like?
let me know....
thanks all...
oh by the way i changed my name.......i used to be heretic71186
-porter
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"Lord below, your abysmal horrors we call forth. Awaken! Rise up and cleanse this earth with fire." -T.B.D.M.
"You are not crazy if you talk to yourself. You are only crazy if you talk back..." -?
"Your mouth is full...full of disease. And yet, I still want to pull your teeth." -Knarnak |
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Mon Jun 13, 2005 4:37 am |
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Kamahl
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Joined: 29 Apr 2005
Posts: 1668
Location: Slovenia-Ljubljana |
its a bit.......differente.
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Mon Jun 13, 2005 10:53 am |
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titus
Survivor of Hell
Joined: 03 Aug 2003
Posts: 778
Location: Standing at the Hell mouth |
different but good. I like dark poems and this one is.
although I can't find the meaning of it really?
is there one or is it just a dark savage story ?
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Mon Jun 13, 2005 12:29 pm |
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Kamahl
King of Spam
Joined: 29 Apr 2005
Posts: 1668
Location: Slovenia-Ljubljana |
its really wiered and how can i change my title i and i have looked into the faq
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Mon Jun 13, 2005 12:37 pm |
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Val
Risen From Ashes
Joined: 18 Feb 2002
Posts: 14724
Location: Utah, USA |
That sounded like a song by a death metal band. 
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Mon Jun 13, 2005 7:20 pm |
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titus
Survivor of Hell
Joined: 03 Aug 2003
Posts: 778
Location: Standing at the Hell mouth |
I thought I would share an other of my poems:
It has been,
So long,
So long since
I felt good.
I had it all,
All that one can want
A few good friends,
A special someone
And then
Then it happened,
And nothing,
Nothing was the same.
It hurted.
It hurted so much
And now,
All is returning,
Slowly,
Painful memories are crawling in,
Wripping the flesh
Once again.
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Mon Jun 13, 2005 7:49 pm |
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