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Knarnak
Keeper of the Gates
Joined: 01 May 2005
Posts: 109
Location: Illinois |
my last poem was basically drunken madness...ill leave it up to everyone else to find the meaning...but to me its bout the mysteries it holds and my drunken squables...
thanks all!
yours,
-Knarnak (porter)
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"Lord below, your abysmal horrors we call forth. Awaken! Rise up and cleanse this earth with fire." -T.B.D.M.
"You are not crazy if you talk to yourself. You are only crazy if you talk back..." -?
"Your mouth is full...full of disease. And yet, I still want to pull your teeth." -Knarnak |
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Knarnak
Keeper of the Gates
Joined: 01 May 2005
Posts: 109
Location: Illinois |
At an altar as it stands
Its hands high upon the air
Can you stand the wicked stare
Upon its immortal strands
Time tilts torture anew
And the foul have not a chance
Can they stand to watch the dance
Little as did few
Fate draws near
And he calls forth the morbid
He ravages as none have did
And nothing grows but fear
The static charges and begins release
The time has almost come
The demon sweeps away and from
Between the planes of time that crease
Alls that stands and wades
Is nothing but deceased and rubble
That spell he just had to bubble
Now all begins to fade
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theres another for the stash all...
wow can you beleive some one actually voted for the pole entitled "wow, what a peice of crap!"?
that makes me smile...
thanks all!!
-porter
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"Lord below, your abysmal horrors we call forth. Awaken! Rise up and cleanse this earth with fire." -T.B.D.M.
"You are not crazy if you talk to yourself. You are only crazy if you talk back..." -?
"Your mouth is full...full of disease. And yet, I still want to pull your teeth." -Knarnak |
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Thu Jun 16, 2005 9:10 pm |
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Kamahl
King of Spam
Joined: 29 Apr 2005
Posts: 1668
Location: Slovenia-Ljubljana |
its better but the dance part is really wierd
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Fri Jun 17, 2005 9:46 am |
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Knarnak
Keeper of the Gates
Joined: 01 May 2005
Posts: 109
Location: Illinois |
throughout that one i was refering to a wizard destroying the world (in a nutshell)
the dance refers to his madness and the powers he created....
i wish more people would post their work....but i am still very happy that people still post on this thread
thanks all and the inspiration is appreciated...
-porter
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"Lord below, your abysmal horrors we call forth. Awaken! Rise up and cleanse this earth with fire." -T.B.D.M.
"You are not crazy if you talk to yourself. You are only crazy if you talk back..." -?
"Your mouth is full...full of disease. And yet, I still want to pull your teeth." -Knarnak |
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Fri Jun 17, 2005 9:44 pm |
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Val
Risen From Ashes
Joined: 18 Feb 2002
Posts: 14724
Location: Utah, USA |
Well, I'd post something, if I didn't think that most of the poetry that I have written is sophomoric drivel. I'm my own worst critic. 
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Fri Jun 17, 2005 9:56 pm |
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Roqua
High Emperor
Joined: 02 Sep 2003
Posts: 897
Location: rump |
I'll help you out Val, your stuff can't br worse than mine.
Title: I Drink My Own Pee
By Roqua
I drink my own pee
I eat my poo
And then I put on
my blue suede shoe
I make love to chickens
sheeps, and cows too
I like to make them
go moo
I want my mom
I want her bad
I like her bum
Is that so bad?
I drink my own pee
and eat my poo
I guess I shouldn't
because its taboo
Actually, thats pretty good seeing as I make it up in 3 seconds. I have mad phat skills. I am so great.
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Fri Jun 17, 2005 10:47 pm |
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Val
Risen From Ashes
Joined: 18 Feb 2002
Posts: 14724
Location: Utah, USA |
 I think I'd have to work pretty hard to top that one.
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Fri Jun 17, 2005 11:15 pm |
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Roqua
High Emperor
Joined: 02 Sep 2003
Posts: 897
Location: rump |
quote:
Originally posted by Val
I think I'd have to work pretty hard to top that one.
Thanks Val, I put a lot of effort into it and I'm glad to see it was appreciated.
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Sat Jun 18, 2005 6:05 pm |
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Knarnak
Keeper of the Gates
Joined: 01 May 2005
Posts: 109
Location: Illinois |
damn that one is awsome man!
whats yer secret? i needa know!
if i ever make a poem book thats gonna be the first one i put in there...as long as i have yer permission...
keep em comin all! have a good one peeps!
thanks all
-porter
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"Lord below, your abysmal horrors we call forth. Awaken! Rise up and cleanse this earth with fire." -T.B.D.M.
"You are not crazy if you talk to yourself. You are only crazy if you talk back..." -?
"Your mouth is full...full of disease. And yet, I still want to pull your teeth." -Knarnak |
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Sat Jun 18, 2005 6:55 pm |
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Roqua
High Emperor
Joined: 02 Sep 2003
Posts: 897
Location: rump |
Okay, on request here is another:
Title: Passing Lane Cruisers
By Roqua
Trying to get to work on time
Passing lane cruisers slow me down
I want to smash into them
Why cruise in the passing lane, clown?
I'd stab the stupid whore
and her stupid cat
I'd stab her little kids
those stupid brats
They'd grow up thinking its okay
to break the law in this greedy, selfish way
but if I killed them they wouldn't grow up,
now thats the way
I'd like to stab passing lane cruisers
and their family too
distant cousins, neigbors
maybe even you
I'd stab em all
I'd have a ball
I wouldn't get stuck
behind their illegsl blocking of a designated passing lane
and I'd get to work on time with a little luck
Left lane for passing
middle for cruising
right for exiting
or
Left for passing
right for cruising and exiting
It is simple
If you are in the left lane
and someone gets on your ass
let them pass
or I'll stab you
and smoke some grass
and catch a bass
and let it go
then do some blow
thats all i know
Free James Brown, beyooch
I'm not good at leet speak
But I give a good smooch
just ask my dad
and he'd be glad
to tell you how good
I kiss and caress
and of all the sexual prowess
I posess
Show my your boobs
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Sat Jun 18, 2005 8:19 pm |
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titus
Survivor of Hell
Joined: 03 Aug 2003
Posts: 778
Location: Standing at the Hell mouth |
Some older work of me:
Some times I still daydream about you
In my dream you say:
“I still want you
I love you”
Than I snap out of it,
Crying, because I realise
it is just a dream
and nothing more
let me know what you rhink of it
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Sat Jun 18, 2005 10:12 pm |
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Val
Risen From Ashes
Joined: 18 Feb 2002
Posts: 14724
Location: Utah, USA |
Okay, I finally got around to digging out a poem. Just remember, you asked.
Insomnia
By Val
Can't sleep
Mind runs
...through memories
...through thoughts
...through a life
Racing
Pacing
Restless imagination
In a helpless situation
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Sun Jun 19, 2005 3:58 am |
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Roqua
High Emperor
Joined: 02 Sep 2003
Posts: 897
Location: rump |
Thats really good Val. I have really bad sleeping problems so I can empathize. And things like tylonol PM make me more awake, so basically I'm screwed without going to see a doctor (something my penis won't let me do).
Whenever I try and sleep my heart starts beating really fast and my mind goes a mile a minute, and the more I can't sleep the more angry I get, the faster my heart beats and my mind races, until its time to get up. So I usually think up stories and crap to keep from getting angry, and if I get into I can drift off to sleep and maybe get 3 or 5 hours of it.
None of that meditation, counting, focus crap works either.
So basically that poem was written for me, awww. Val's in love. Sorry Val, I'm married, you damn home wrecker.
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Sun Jun 19, 2005 4:31 am |
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Roqua
High Emperor
Joined: 02 Sep 2003
Posts: 897
Location: rump |
quote:
Originally posted by titus
Some older work of me:
Some times I still daydream about you
In my dream you say:
“I still want you
I love you”
Than I snap out of it,
Crying, because I realise
it is just a dream
and nothing more
let me know what you rhink of it
This was written for me also, wasn't it? It will never happen Titus, I'm married.
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Vegitarian is the Indian word for lousey hunter. |
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Sun Jun 19, 2005 5:23 am |
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Knarnak
Keeper of the Gates
Joined: 01 May 2005
Posts: 109
Location: Illinois |
this is the most i have laughed in a long time people....it might because im drunk outa this world but geez....laughing is good
keep em comin n that stuff is rich....i love the show me yer boobs part....totally unexpected....
imma come up with one later when im completely enebriated....
exspect a good one!
later all!
thanks!
-porter
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"Lord below, your abysmal horrors we call forth. Awaken! Rise up and cleanse this earth with fire." -T.B.D.M.
"You are not crazy if you talk to yourself. You are only crazy if you talk back..." -?
"Your mouth is full...full of disease. And yet, I still want to pull your teeth." -Knarnak |
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