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Jaz
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...I am so proud and honored and sitting here all red-faced and flushed and overwhelmed... pray, tell me what you think of it!!!

http://gothic.rpgdot.com/index.php?hsaction=10062&infoID=19&pageID=95&page=1

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Post Tue Mar 12, 2002 10:30 pm
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sauron38
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Reading it now.
Post Tue Mar 12, 2002 10:32 pm
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Yay, yay! Back with a review later.

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Post Tue Mar 12, 2002 10:35 pm
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sauron38
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Good job. May I add a suggestion?
Yes
If Milten had warded the guards off before they got Aaron... I wanted to see some written flaming! :smile:

[ This Message was edited by: sauron38 on 2002-03-12 17:02 ]
Post Tue Mar 12, 2002 10:58 pm
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Jaz
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The story would have been a bit shorter then . But I agree, a nice idea.

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Post Tue Mar 12, 2002 11:02 pm
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sauron38
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I think it could have been a bit longer with that, I mean Milten may have only killed one guard before they forced him to teleport away.
Post Tue Mar 12, 2002 11:03 pm
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Jaz
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They wouldn't have managed to force him to teleport off. Milten is too good; in fact, he's better than the rest of the fire mages was...

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Post Tue Mar 12, 2002 11:05 pm
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sauron38
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Maybe if he was summoned by "me" to go to the meeting place?
Post Tue Mar 12, 2002 11:07 pm
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Jaz
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Perhaps, yes... but since I actually played this out and Milten never even cared to look... but then, the guards attacked me=Aaron only after I attacked them. Well...

Oh well. It might have been done. I didn't do it, though...
...actually, I don't even know how the story will end. I mean, END.

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Post Tue Mar 12, 2002 11:11 pm
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deagol
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absolutely great story man!
Post Tue Mar 12, 2002 11:12 pm
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Jaz
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Thanks ! I'm not a man, though...

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Post Tue Mar 12, 2002 11:13 pm
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sauron38
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Hopefully "me" isn't a Wave of Death caster.
Post Tue Mar 12, 2002 11:13 pm
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Jaz
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My 'Me' wasn't .

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Post Tue Mar 12, 2002 11:17 pm
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sauron38
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Will 'me' end up healing Aaron? Or walk into the cell wielding a Fire spell?
Post Tue Mar 12, 2002 11:22 pm
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Phil, the Prince of Insuf
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Poor 'ol naked Aaron! Great story, though.
Post Tue Mar 12, 2002 11:37 pm
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