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sauron38
Rara Avis
Joined: 14 Jan 2002
Posts: 4396
Location: Winnipeg's Sanctum Sanctorum |
Reading it now. |
Tue Mar 12, 2002 10:32 pm |
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Val
Risen From Ashes
Joined: 18 Feb 2002
Posts: 14724
Location: Utah, USA |
Yay, yay! Back with a review later.
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Tue Mar 12, 2002 10:35 pm |
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sauron38
Rara Avis
Joined: 14 Jan 2002
Posts: 4396
Location: Winnipeg's Sanctum Sanctorum |
Good job. May I add a suggestion?
Yes
If Milten had warded the guards off before they got Aaron... I wanted to see some written flaming! :smile:
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Tue Mar 12, 2002 10:58 pm |
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Jaz
Late Night Spook
Joined: 20 Jan 2002
Posts: 9708
Location: RPGDot |
The story would have been a bit shorter then  . But I agree, a nice idea.
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Tue Mar 12, 2002 11:02 pm |
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sauron38
Rara Avis
Joined: 14 Jan 2002
Posts: 4396
Location: Winnipeg's Sanctum Sanctorum |
I think it could have been a bit longer with that, I mean Milten may have only killed one guard before they forced him to teleport away. |
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Tue Mar 12, 2002 11:03 pm |
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Jaz
Late Night Spook
Joined: 20 Jan 2002
Posts: 9708
Location: RPGDot |
They wouldn't have managed to force him to teleport off. Milten is too good; in fact, he's better than the rest of the fire mages was...
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Tue Mar 12, 2002 11:05 pm |
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sauron38
Rara Avis
Joined: 14 Jan 2002
Posts: 4396
Location: Winnipeg's Sanctum Sanctorum |
Maybe if he was summoned by "me" to go to the meeting place? |
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Tue Mar 12, 2002 11:07 pm |
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Jaz
Late Night Spook
Joined: 20 Jan 2002
Posts: 9708
Location: RPGDot |
Perhaps, yes... but since I actually played this out and Milten never even cared to look... but then, the guards attacked me=Aaron only after I attacked them. Well...
Oh well. It might have been done. I didn't do it, though...
...actually, I don't even know how the story will end. I mean, END.
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Tue Mar 12, 2002 11:11 pm |
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deagol
Village Dweller
Joined: 12 Mar 2002
Posts: 8
Location: old country |
absolutely great story man! |
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Tue Mar 12, 2002 11:12 pm |
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Jaz
Late Night Spook
Joined: 20 Jan 2002
Posts: 9708
Location: RPGDot |
Thanks ! I'm not a man, though... 
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Tue Mar 12, 2002 11:13 pm |
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sauron38
Rara Avis
Joined: 14 Jan 2002
Posts: 4396
Location: Winnipeg's Sanctum Sanctorum |
Hopefully "me" isn't a Wave of Death caster. |
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Tue Mar 12, 2002 11:13 pm |
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Jaz
Late Night Spook
Joined: 20 Jan 2002
Posts: 9708
Location: RPGDot |
My 'Me' wasn't .
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Tue Mar 12, 2002 11:17 pm |
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sauron38
Rara Avis
Joined: 14 Jan 2002
Posts: 4396
Location: Winnipeg's Sanctum Sanctorum |
Will 'me' end up healing Aaron? Or walk into the cell wielding a Fire spell? |
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Tue Mar 12, 2002 11:22 pm |
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Phil, the Prince of Insuf
Eager Tradesman
Joined: 26 Feb 2002
Posts: 42
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Poor 'ol naked Aaron! Great story, though. |
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Tue Mar 12, 2002 11:37 pm |
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